Saturday, April 15, 2006

Sunday Scribblings: When We Were Wee . . .

A Sunday Scribbling based on what I think my children would write after they are grown--right now, they are just a couple of boys with dirty feet, ages four and two.

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When We Were Wee . . .

When we were wee, we ran barefoot in our city backyard, all fenced-in grass and Pine and concrete walkway. We squatted and inspected--rocks, grubs, an army of ants conferencing on a dandelion.

Scoldings that seemed the size of boulders--let's break it down--tears into crumbly rocks, rocks into sandy, dry soil; tears to meet the ground and become lunch for the marigolds and petunias that bordered the lawn.

We watched our father leaning over his sketchbook; we wanted to be artists--we drew Spongebob with sidewalk chalk. We watched our mother scribbling in a notebook; we wanted to be writers--we scratched the grafitti of our names onto flat stones. We listened to a planes roar overhead; we wanted to be the pilots who trampolined onto clouds--we leapt off the top of the sliding board and into the mattress of grass. We could be all three, y'know, and other things, too: soccer stars, builders, chefs, and farmers.

We worked as a team, gathering pebbles and grass for sand stew--but there was always more to be done, a tent to be built, plastic toys to be hauled, some weeds to be cleared, the dog to be chased, then mounted, and ridden like an untamed pony. We declared war on one another over a shovel (James, clocked in the right eye, Mac, shoved down, face-first onto gravel), and we declared war on our parents, too, demanding a steady supply of cold beverages.

Days, scalded, turned into nights, tepid, and we still believed, as our parents hoped, that all could be cured with the proper SPF sunscreen, insect repellent, a cartoon, and a kiss. Inside for dinner, mosquitos clicking like tap dancers, against the stark kitchen light, and we longed for a light that warmed. We ate our favorite food group--"yellow things"--then swam in pool of Mr. Bubble, watching our tub turn brown as our day merged with the bathwater.

When we slept, we dreamt of bumblebees and tomato plants, skittish dogs and orange cars. When we woke up, we asked to go outside again.

32 Comments:

Blogger GreenishLady said...

OOoh. This is just scrumptious. Delicious. Yum!

4/15/2006 8:24 PM  
Blogger GoGo said...

Hell yeah! Childhood was a wonderful time. If you did it right, life was the love of your life.

Great read. I am going to print this and put it on my wall!

4/15/2006 9:01 PM  
Blogger Deb R said...

What a perfect word picture of a childhood summer day! Love it.

4/15/2006 9:24 PM  
Blogger Jennifer S. said...

A fun perspective! My daughter said the other day "I want be an artist, a nurse and a vet"

I truly always enjoy your writing :)

4/15/2006 9:43 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Cate, i loved this so much, its my favorite...but since I always say the same thing I thought I would say it in French this time:

Cate, vous êtes brillant. J'ai aimé lire ceci, il étais devine. Vous avez capturé chaque moment, chaque sentiment d'enfance admirablement. Vous êtes un auteur si doué. Je pourrais lire vos histoires d'aube jusqu'au crépuscule. Je suis si heureux vous êtes mon ami.

Amour, andrea

4/15/2006 9:54 PM  
Blogger Annie Jeffries said...

Oh my Cate, "we squatted and inspected..." What a fabulous visual!! I stopped there for a moment closing my eyes and picturing them. And then the dirty of the day merging with the water - another great visual. Delightful and idyllic.

Annie

4/15/2006 11:17 PM  
Blogger meghan said...

hi there! What a great Mom you are - to notice these things and for it to be okay that they are romping and dirty and having a ball! Thank you for this look at your boys! I hope you keep it for them to read when they are older!

4/16/2006 2:19 AM  
Blogger Tongue in Cheek Antiques said...

"...mosquitos clicking like tap dancers...watching our tub turn brown as our day merged with the bathwater.

When we slept, we dreamt of bumblebees and tomato plants.. When we woke up, we asked to go outside again."
Oh my these lines you wrote flow and brought a river of memories to me,(I grew up in the country on a farm.) You are a gifted writer!!

4/16/2006 6:01 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I LOVE THIS! Love that you wrote it from your sons' perspective. Fabulous writing.

4/16/2006 7:48 AM  
Blogger kristen said...

There would be curse words in my daughter's Sunday scribblings; that and the fact that the potty mouth fund (from mama) sent her to college. (=

4/16/2006 8:31 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i love love love this. your writing is a pleasure to read. and i love the way you chose to use this theme. the details and the rhythm of your sentences are beautiful. i'm so glad to have found & visited your site :-) (and thank you for your comment on mine)

4/16/2006 9:34 AM  
Blogger eliza said...

what a lovely gift to your sons and to us.

4/16/2006 10:12 AM  
Blogger Laini Taylor said...

Wonderful wonderful imagery as always! "as our day merged with the bathwater"!! And how busy a child's day seems here -- filled with very important activities. It brings me back to the way we did everything, played, built things, with such utter commitment to it. Sandcastles, forts, makeshift fishing rods... Great post!

4/16/2006 11:01 AM  
Blogger Maggie May said...

SUCH a cool take on this week's topic!! Your words flow so beautifully and unexpectidly. I especially love "..our day merged with the bathwater." You're a great writer, Cate! (Oh, and my grandparents live in Bel Air MD--Harford County.) xo

4/16/2006 3:26 PM  
Blogger Susannah Conway said...

I loved this so much. such evocative language! - thank you for sharing it... bumblebees and tomato plants - i can smell them, hear them, i want to eat yellow things and be four years old again. wonderful Sx

4/16/2006 3:43 PM  
Blogger gkgirl said...

beautiful...

you have captured
their lives
in words...

wow.

4/16/2006 6:35 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Oh honey, you need to print that out right now and save it somewhere special for your boys, it is such a cool perspective and one I am sure they really appreciate when they are older.

4/16/2006 6:49 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Oh honey, you need to print that out right now and save it somewhere special for your boys, it is such a cool perspective and one I am sure they really appreciate when they are older.

4/16/2006 6:49 PM  
Blogger Annie Z said...

All the other comments have echoed my own thoughts! It was so great to see you take the perspective of your own children!
JTL
xxx

4/16/2006 7:15 PM  
Blogger Otter said...

Pretty ingenious... a pool full of Mr Bubble. What great way to bath!

Cate such beautiful succulent images!

4/16/2006 11:40 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

That was neat! Great perspective, and no curse words. Your kids are not going to remember cursing from you? Aye..... So Andrea knows french huh, interesting.
My kids are mainly going to remember...."don't make mommy mad"!

4/17/2006 6:05 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

you have quite a way with words!
beautiful!
glad i checked out your blog on DebR's reccommendation

4/17/2006 7:49 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like the way you dove into their points of view and brought the poetry with you.

4/17/2006 9:26 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

And whatever path the boys choose in life, they will always thank mom and dad for giving them the best childhood ever!!!
You are fantastic! Thank you for sharing a slice of the boys lives with us!

4/17/2006 12:39 PM  
Blogger Shesawriter said...

"When we slept, we dreamt of bumblebees and tomato plants, skittish dogs and orange cars. When we woke up, we asked to go outside again."

Simply beautiful. I was right there with you. :-)

4/17/2006 3:06 PM  
Blogger Kim G. said...

What a gorgeous picture of all that being a 2 and 4 year old boy should be!
Here's to dirt and bugs and slimy slugs and the wonder of little boys!

Blessings!

4/17/2006 5:10 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

How childhood should be! And despite growing up in a city on a different continent there is a lot here I can identify with. We, too, played a lot outside, there is a big forrest surrounding my city, one where you can ride your bike for hours, play ball, hide & seek, or be an adventurer on a secret mission.

What strikes me most, reading this, is how much freedom we had as children. We played far away from our house, my mother having a vague idea of our whereabouts in the woods or neighbourhood streets, and we didn't come home until darkness descended. This is a freedom unbeknown to most of today's children.

4/17/2006 7:55 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I love all of the free WANTING they have--they see, they respond and they WANT openly and passionately.

Your sons are lucky to have you. :)

You are such a beautiful writer. That is all.

4/18/2006 12:17 AM  
Blogger Cate said...

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4/18/2006 8:47 AM  
Blogger Cate said...

melda,
Thank you for your kind words! I can't wait for your book to arrive!

Gogo,
"If you did it right, life was the love of your life." Oh, your comment just made me grin! So true. The teenage years sucked, but childhood--that was pretty damn close to heaven (or should have been!).

Deb,
Thank you. And thank you again for the comment "nod" in your post from this weekend! I've had some really nice visitors from your place! xo

Jennifer,
I LOVE when kids say that kind of stuff, all matter of factly. My boy has been consistent about wanting to be a farmer but he adds the other things when they strike his fancy. Just cracks me up!

A,
I don't what to say to you other than you are the best. Which, translated into jibberish, my mother tongue, would look like this: afjdfuaeiue dhjre erfheor aerererafoieure32! xo

Annieelf,
Thank you for visiting and for your kind words! I sooooo appreciate them!

Megg,
Oh, I notice the things that I want to notice. As Painted Pear (Rebecca) says later on in these comments, "Where are the memories of four-letter words?" SO TRUE. I probably should be a bit frightened about what my boys would write about their childhoods! Thank you for your lovely comment. I relished every word of your post while drinking my Sunday morning coffee! xo

Paris,
Thank you very much for your comment. Also, thank you for visiting!

Tongue In Cheek Antiques,
Awww, thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback! I love SS--so many different perspectives and so much phenomenal writing!

Marilyn,
Thank you so much. I loved your post, too!

Jennifer,
Thank you! I'm so glad you visited, too! I appreciate your generous feedback!

Eliza,
Thank you for those kind words! I'm grateful for your visit and your comment!

Laini,
Oh, yes, my boys take their activities and "schedule" very seriously! I love it--so much reminds me of being young and the freedom is supposed to accompany childhood! Thanks for your comment! Hope your feast on Easter was absolutely delicious!

Maggie,
Oh, Bel Air is beautiful! I almost took a job with Harford Co. Schools when I first graduated! I've regretted, at times, missing out on that opportunity! No wonder your memories are so wonderful! Thank you for your comment!

Susannah,
Thank you so much! I think that four is a very good year, though recently, my boy has decided that he is thirty-four! Lots of delicious yellow things, too, like french fries and cheese!

GKGirl,
Thank you so much! Your comment just warmed my heart!

Shannon,
Thank you very much! I would be curious to see if it correlates much with their memories when they ARE older. I hope . . .

JTL,
Thank you so much! I'm grateful for your encouragement and kind words!

Lisa,
Oh, thank you. I really appreciate your feedback! I wanted to do their perspective from the beginning, but it was harder to write than I thought it would be.

Bec,
I should have included a few lines about my temper and the cursing! You made me SNORT when I read your comment. So flippin' (alright: fuckin') true. Our most recent rant: Don't stomp on the flowers!

Natalya,
Oh, thank you so much for visiting and commenting! And thanks again to Deb, for the "nod!" I love her writing and all of her other, amazing skills!

Jason,
Thank you! You always say such kind things!

Judy,
My boys were not thinking that I (or childhood) was so fantastic yesterday--last day of Spring break (which didn't come soon enough!). Thank you for your kind comment!

Tanya,
Thank you! Your feeback means sooo much to me and I appreciate it!

Kim G,
Arrgghh--the inevitable bugs and slimy things. A grub was the highlight of the weekend: "Hi little fellow!" I was meant to be the mother of pale, bookish, indoor children who like to read and color!

Just kidding: I'm learning to appreciate those slimy things, bit by bit! Thanks for your kind comment!

Kerstin,
YES! You're right. We just "disappeared" for awhile and no one really worried about what we did or where we went, as long as we didn't hurt each other and were back by dark. I take that kind of freedom for granted now--can't even imagine ever letting my boys live that kind of life. Thanks for visiting!

Mardougrrl,
Oh, I hadn't even thought about that, but YES, it is "I want!" Or "mine!" Thank you for your lovely comment--your SS was just glorious!

4/18/2006 9:34 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey, same with us..
Don't pick the DAMN flowers, is a very, very overused rant in our backyard these days. Though the word DAMN is only screamed inside my head, I do believe the kids can hear it pulsing through my temples and eye sockets!!!!

Hey, the word verification at this very moment includes the word damn...funny how life comes around!

4/18/2006 10:14 AM  
Blogger Jamie said...

How wonderful! Every detail brought me there with you. I enjoyed visiting your wee time so very much. I loved the grand dreams and the absolute belief in them. Would that we could hold onto that!

4/18/2006 12:03 PM  

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