Saturday, January 06, 2007

Sunday Scribblings: Kisses

Kisses can be stolen, snatched up by someone who has no right to them, who ferrets them away away into a designer pocketbook just as a teenager sneaks a tube of mascara into a backpack.

Kisses can be stolen, y'know.

Kisses can be stolen with an air of entitlement. Petal lips brushing a stubbled cheek at Happy Hour.

How are you doing? It's sooo good to see you again.

And while the wife makes room at the table by moving her coat, folding it over the spine of her own chair, the husband remembers the kiss as he watches the woman who stole it sit down, crossing her long thin legs that end with strappy stiletto shoes. She laughes at a joke, her mouth open wide, and he remembers that kiss and remembers it again and again and again.

A kiss on the edge of a wine glass, leaving lipstick prints, like a sloppy thief who forgot to wear gloves.

And he remembers that kiss again and again.

The stolen kisses are the dangerous ones. Like grenades, they are poised to explode into something larger.

He is closer to the woman than he is to his wife, his pants kissing long thin legs with strappy stiletto shoes under the table.

And his wife gulps her margarita and feels a dull thump in her head and lists the things that can be stolen.

Bathrobes, soap, afternoons away from the office.

Kisses.
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20 Comments:

Blogger Amber said...

Oh!! I have MISSED your writing, Cate! This is a brilliant little bit. ;)

oxox :)

1/06/2007 3:03 PM  
Blogger tania said...

Just a random passerby commenting to say "great take on the Sunday Scribbling"

You write beautifully.

1/06/2007 6:21 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Stolen or given? I like the tension and mistrust in this story.

1/06/2007 7:33 PM  
Blogger HoBess said...

I'm with Parfait and Amber ... you've been missed! My favorite part? The pants kissing the long thin leg under the table.

1/06/2007 10:36 PM  
Blogger Deb R said...

I know I sound like an echo, but lord have I ever missed your writing! It makes me happy to read your words again.

You've captured that slice of life perfectly.

1/07/2007 1:02 AM  
Blogger JHS said...

You are very talented! Glad I found your blog.

1/07/2007 5:43 AM  
Blogger Becca said...

Welcome back!

Very interesting - I like the little edge to this piece.

Well done !

1/07/2007 6:33 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

Beautifully written. Stolen kisses are the dangerous ones but can lead to beuatiful relationships....

1/07/2007 9:37 AM  
Blogger January said...

Oh happy day! Welcome back Cate. I've missed your writing.

Thanks for posting this stolen moment.

1/07/2007 9:53 AM  
Blogger awareness said...

love it! I love stealing kisses!!! There is a sense of entitlement connected to them.....never thought about it that way.......

When I steal a kiss....I love to see the reaction on the lucky kissed one.... :)

1/07/2007 9:54 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ooooh, that was riveting, edgy and raw. I could feel the margharita on my lips with total resentment towards stilletos, for that is MY STUBBLED CHEEK going through my head.

1/07/2007 9:59 AM  
Blogger Otter said...

Oh Cate I clicked once again expecting to see "Kitchen's closed" sign and it instead Kisses pops up! Yes!
I LOVE your writing and Kisses did not fail me. Ah!
And I see another piece below about magnetice poetry which I look forward to reading later. But I'm going to treat you like all my favorite authors and savor Kisses just for now and return later to read more.
I am so HAPPY you are blogging again. It brings me joy to read your words!
Lisa @ http://otters43x365.blogspot.com/

1/07/2007 10:11 AM  
Blogger GoGo said...

Hey! Welcome back. I look forward to reading more.

1/07/2007 1:16 PM  
Blogger claireylove said...

Oooh - that's killer, Cate!

1/07/2007 1:29 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Oh. This one took my breath away. I'll say it again. I've missed you.

1/07/2007 1:34 PM  
Blogger Cate said...

Oh my gosh, I am just OVERWELMED by all of your encouraging, kind comments! Thank you so much! xo

1/07/2007 5:38 PM  
Blogger Cate said...

That would be "overwhelmed." :)

1/07/2007 5:39 PM  
Blogger Deirdre said...

Oh, this is good. Wickedly good.

1/08/2007 5:59 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wow this is great, such a fabulous take on the topic. Love your writing :)

1/10/2007 1:10 AM  
Blogger LDahl said...

Cateeeeeeee! Darlin' girl...how happy I am to see you back word-slingin' in bloggieland!

"Order up!!" she snarled as she threw the filled plate on the counter.

Yea!!!!!!!!!!

1/11/2007 3:05 PM  

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