Thursday, June 15, 2006

Poetry Thursday: "In Crepe Paper" by Imelda Maguire

For Poetry Thursday this week, I chose a poem by Imelda Maguire, called "In Crepe Paper."

It is my favorite poem, ever.

I will not do this poet--my friend Imelda--or her poem justice. I know it. Because I'm too emotionally invested in the work, and when I feel that way, my descriptions are smothered with sentimentality. I'm like a first grader who has just read a brilliant picture book and struggles to explain what it meant to me ("It was really good. It was super cool. I liked it because the colors were bright and it made me feel happy."). Stunned by the impact. Joyfully awkward. Dazed. And breathless.

I chisel at the surface, trying to convey the emotions that Imelda's passages draw out, and I create a crumbly mess--like using a butter knife to cut into a solid chocolate Easter egg. When you read Imelda's poetry, her gentle voice fills your insides. You become a container for the thoughts and ideas you've just read, and you hold tight to your feelings because it is a privilege to be awestruck, and you had forgotten that you could have that reaction to something, and you want to keep on feeling that way for just a little while longer.

Imelda's book, "Shout If You Want Me To Sing" is available through Amazon.co.uk. It was the smartest purchase I made this year, this lovely volume that is thin enough to be wedged into a purse, yet bursting with language and ideas. This book has traveled with me to Manhattan and Pennsylvania, but also to the grocery store, the park, and the local Mexican resaurant with the terrace downtown. We enjoy cocktails together, this book and I, in the backyard at dusk. Many of my friends lament that they feel worn from my neediness, and this book, now with its creased binding and folded pages, feels no differently. Yet it doesn't complain.

I share this poem, my favorite, with Imelda's permission. It makes me want to be a better mother, reminds me of the power of words and of the reciprocal nature of kindness.

In Crepe Paper
by Imelda Maguire

Because there was a rush of Yes
into the mind of the teacher and
because the Yes became a sound

Yes, she said, Yes, to the child at last
because he finally heard the Yes,
he carried it home like a bright yellow flower,

a big one with petals made of sunlight
to a mother who was waiting for a Yes,
because the word was carried in

in the mouth of her heartchild, that Yes
became the answer, the chant, the only
word in her day-long litany.

Yes, Yes, Yes

c. 2004, Summer Palace Press
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20 Comments:

Blogger Jennifer S. said...

beautiful, so glad you shared - I know that little boy :)

6/15/2006 8:54 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Beautiful. As mothers its easy to fall into the trap of "No, not right now, nope you can't"...great reminder to say YES and how contagious that positive word is.

Lovely Cate.
a.

6/15/2006 9:24 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

That was a very beautiful poem. It's amazing how a simple word can affect a person. Imelda did a FANTASTIC job relaying the feeling of excitement.

Thanks so much for sharing. I will need to look for this book so I can read more of her work.

Read ya' later!

6/15/2006 9:56 AM  
Blogger harmonyinline said...

Oh "yes" it is beautiful!

6/15/2006 10:23 AM  
Blogger wendy said...

I loved this poem SO MUCH that I'm gonna print it out...as a poster, and put it on the wall of our Special ed classroom, to remind us all (the teachers) of the power we hold, and to tend our gardens MINDFULLY!

thanks so much,
Wendy

6/15/2006 10:25 AM  
Blogger kristen said...

This is lovely and it make me cry.

6/15/2006 10:34 AM  
Blogger Amber said...

Yes! You are right aboutthis poem. I love the idea-- no, the fact-- of how lif eis like this. We pass along our energy and our experiences.

And I am also like that when I really love something! LOL. I sound like tard.

:)

6/15/2006 11:06 AM  
Blogger Madeleine said...

wonderful, wonderful. We all need to say 'Yes" more. I know that I do.
I will be inspired and now try harder.
Thankyou for sharing the poem and your own thoughts.
:)

6/15/2006 11:30 AM  
Blogger Alex S said...

wow- just when I think I can't possibly find another poem I love you have given me one. This is definitely one to print out and savor.

6/15/2006 11:53 AM  
Blogger Alex S said...

just when i think I will never find another poem I love you have given me one-I'm going to print it out and savor it. Thank you!

6/15/2006 11:54 AM  
Blogger claireylove said...

*Many of my friends lament that they feel worn from my neediness, and this book, now with its creased binding and folded pages, feels no differently. Yet it doesn't complain.*
Oh, you've got to laugh...
And what an upifting, affirming poem. Just the ticket for the doom and gloom I'm usually dishing out ;-)

6/15/2006 3:39 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey~
Thank you so much for sharing this poem...truly a moving piece of work. I intend to read more.

6/15/2006 4:12 PM  
Blogger Tammy Brierly said...

I LOVED it! I can see why it's your favorite :) Thank you!

6/15/2006 4:16 PM  
Blogger hollibobolli said...

Funny, how you doubted your ability to do justice to this, your favorite poem.. I did love the poem - but for me, reading how you felt about your favorite work of poetry was equally as beautiful.. if not more so. Because to be moved like that by art, and to be able to convey it so descriptively - I think that is pretty special in itself.

But, you know I always think that about your writing.

6/15/2006 4:45 PM  
Blogger Rebekah said...

I didn't know her, but can't wait to purchase the book. Thank you for sharing, and for the incredibly sensitive, breathlessly beautiful poem.

6/15/2006 8:42 PM  
Blogger January said...

Thank you for introducing me to a new poet.

It does serve as a reminder to nurture our kids and to reinforce the positive.

Hmmm ... Not sure which I liked more--the poem or your writing about the poem!

6/16/2006 5:07 AM  
Blogger Shesawriter said...

This is your favorite? It's nice, real nice. My favorite poem of all time is Thanatopsis, by William Cullen Bryant.

6/16/2006 11:36 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

As an aspring teacher myself I was touched by that. Though I want to teach the college child. But I understand the feeling of yes.

6/16/2006 2:53 PM  
Blogger jojo said...

"...and you had forgotten that you could have that reaction to something, and you want to keep on feeling that way for just a little while longer."

i know this feeling (above) well. awestruck. speechless. tears, laughter. i long for these times. this work is beautiful. i think your taste is both superb and inspiring. happy belated poetry thursday and happy weekend!

6/16/2006 4:30 PM  
Blogger liz elayne lamoreux said...

thank you for sharing this one. oh my. i love it. imelda's work just makes my heart fill. yes. it. does.
and your description of your reaction to her work...well that i could just eat up with a spoon too.
you two ladies inspire me to keep writing and writing some more.

6/20/2006 1:29 AM  

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