Poetry Thursday: A Reading
Last night, all of us--Lou, my mother, and me--sprawled in the middle room of our house (oversized chair, a virtual skyline of books and magazines--what normal folks might choose to use as a "dining" area), searching for a poem for me to share on Poetry Thursday.
We read the poetry out loud, and for about an hour, time was measured in rhyme and pentameter. Tick tock seconds rivaled syllables. Oh, he said. Yes, she sighed. How about this one, we each suggested, our voices our elbows, edging one another out of the way. Comma, explanation point, run on/drag on sentences. The dogs were the critics, the roar of the central air was the applause, and the scent of M&M brownies swirled among us like cigarette smoke and cheap aftershave, as intoxicating as a sniff of Wild Turkey; I've been drunk on those fumes. Words were intoxicating, too, more so, in fact. We tried to top each other--a lyrical shout off, and the middle room changed outfits again--smooth, jazzy club ensemble to tattered street scene from West Side Story.
Here's what I finally decided to share, though it was not the People's Choice: Page 22/ oh lucky me by Frances Chung. What a find I consider this poem to be.
Frances Chung's work, to me, is simply worded yet bursting with heavy emotion: the weight of being pre-judged, the weight of being stereotyped, the weight of representing a country or a culture, the weight of being seen yet ultimately dismissed as invisible. I will be buying this woman's book.
For more Poetry, click here to visit the Poetry Thursday website.
We read the poetry out loud, and for about an hour, time was measured in rhyme and pentameter. Tick tock seconds rivaled syllables. Oh, he said. Yes, she sighed. How about this one, we each suggested, our voices our elbows, edging one another out of the way. Comma, explanation point, run on/drag on sentences. The dogs were the critics, the roar of the central air was the applause, and the scent of M&M brownies swirled among us like cigarette smoke and cheap aftershave, as intoxicating as a sniff of Wild Turkey; I've been drunk on those fumes. Words were intoxicating, too, more so, in fact. We tried to top each other--a lyrical shout off, and the middle room changed outfits again--smooth, jazzy club ensemble to tattered street scene from West Side Story.
Here's what I finally decided to share, though it was not the People's Choice: Page 22/ oh lucky me by Frances Chung. What a find I consider this poem to be.
Frances Chung's work, to me, is simply worded yet bursting with heavy emotion: the weight of being pre-judged, the weight of being stereotyped, the weight of representing a country or a culture, the weight of being seen yet ultimately dismissed as invisible. I will be buying this woman's book.
For more Poetry, click here to visit the Poetry Thursday website.
23 Comments:
What a great family experience--reading poetry aloud. I hope to pass down the oral tradition to my family when they're a little older.
I don't know Frances Chung's work but I'm happy to find a new poet to read. Thanks for sharing!
Loved the image of you all sitting around your table....awwww, that is the sweet life.
a.
I think that LizElayne is on to something- a new way for families to spend real quality, FREE time together. I love the image of you three connecting over poetry (& M&M brownies- I want some of those please!) Thank you for sharing this Cate. Its a brief but very heartwarming post and I hope the idea spreads like wildfire. I am going to have a poetry breakfast right now with myself.
Poetry in motion (!) stirring and creating, flavor and song, harmony and connection, what a family treat to read together poems that spoke to you, and each other!
What a fantastic journey you describe in finding this poem - I love that it was so elaborate to reach something so simple, elegant, sardonic and vital. A whittling away to the essence- thank you!
I LOVE the image of you and your husband and mom sitting around reading poetry to each other to the scent of brownies. (I wonder if I could talk my family into that. Hhhmmm...)
I'd never read anything by Frances Chung and now I want to read more.
Also, I have to ask. Was this: "Comma, explanation point, run on/drag on sentences" (italics added by me) deliberate (like you're talking about explaining a point of the poem), or was it a cool Freudian typo for "exclamation point?" Either way, I like it, but I couldn't decide if it was deliberate or a really lucky typo! :-)
Oh! I like this poem a lot; immediately I thought of her saying this sitting in this Chinese restaurant in San Francisco. (= Thank you for sharing.
What a tremendous evening, and thanks for linking me to such a playful poet.
This poem made me laugh.
:)
I loved your description of the evening.. It reminded me of something from Little Women - wonderful.
The poem hit me as something different each time I read it.
Hi Cate... and thanks for your encouragement. I'd never be writing a damn word without you and Tara! Anyway this is deadpanning, as a poetic genre. More to it than meets the eye...
Makes me think of Cohen's texts - not songs but texts - but then again, what doesn't....
Take care and xoxo
Ann Marie
very intriguing poem.
seems like there is more
to be read
between the lines...
Now that poem makes you think. It is just beautiful with the idea of it. Thank you so much for sharing.
I closed my eyes and was in that middle room with you. There are so many layers to this poem. I'll have to read it again.
love this poem - love it...
but even more so, i love the way you described your experience with your family...this was beautiful. i felt like i was tucked away in a corner watching it all (and listening).
Your description of the evening became poetry for me. ALL intoxicating. The poem by Chung is one of those spare wonders that I am blown away by - myself tending to be too verbose. I must go straight way to Amazon.com and invite her to come to my house.
Your description of that evening was poetry to me. I felt like I was there. Great writing!
Silly me. I've forgotten to tell you lateley how much I love the way you turn a phrase ... from the Misc. Cocktail to the entoxicating aromas to the applauding AC. As you mentioned in your "gusher" post, sometimes I get too caught up to leave a comment. Glad you had such a nice trip, enjoy your time with your mom.
I like that you and your husband and mom were hanging around reading poetry out loud. That is just SO COOL!
P.S. THANKS for commenting on my blog! You were my first real comment!!! How exciting!!!
I'll try to post a pic of my Grams. And of our recent trip to Disney!
Cate, Check this out:
http://www.photomichaelwolf.com/100x100/
Let me know what you think of these photos. They really made me do some thinking.
I know I haven't commented much lately... this job of mine has gotten out of hand and is eating me alive, but I do read your blog every week. You are such a special person, I always feel like applauding you! YEA CATE!
Like Oh Lucky Me poem
such simplicity but such emotion in her writing. it comes across as almost comical but is rooted in that tragic vein of people being reduced to sterotypes, where much grander cultures are reduced to one simple icon, and the human element is completely ignored.
i loved envisioning the poetry discussion, exploration, sharing in your room. your family sounds so supportive and creative.
I love the poem, especially with your thoughts about it... thanks for sharing. Isn't PT grand!
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