New Notebook

A new notebook, with paint sample tabs, fork-raked paint, and discount yarn. I'm using it for daily writing prompts, inspired by The Painted Pear's art-a-day and Deb's Daily Art Thang. Yesterday's topic, my first, was "makeover." This is a very rough piece, written quickly, with only minor revisions made as I typed it into this post.
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Sometimes the clients don't like the makeover--they believe that purple velour leggings makes their thighs look huge, that red lipstick is so Cruella DeVille. Carla would like to remind these women of what they looked like when they first walked into her shop--rooster bangs, pasty complexions, high waisted "mom" jeans--but she doesn't. If she were to be honest with herself, even after she works her Paul Mitchell magic, some ladies don't look much different. It's not the clothes, for they certainly are new, tailored to the correct contours of a body rutted with stretchmarks and cellulite. It's not the makeup, applied carefully with a sponge to conceal spider veins, adult acne, and fine lines. It's not even the hair, painted carefully with golden--never brassy--hightlights, then razored into a chic bob. It's what Carla can't makeover, a dish-pan hand spirit, the "lay still till it's over" sexuality, the despair that accompanies impending unemployment--the children are in high school--"we're gonna need to lay you off."
Carla believes in herself, as adept as she is with scissors, a blowdryer, and an oversized round brush. She believes that she could educate her clients, if only they would allow themselves to consider the idea of trading frosted lipstick for matte, or pitch the coupon caddy from the purse. She would say--go barefoot on a sticky sidewalk, swim in a man-made lake, try tampons instead of pads. What Carla does not believe in, however, are her clients, the ability of people to let go of something comfortable, no matter how unsatisfying it is. "Hack it all off," some of the women cry, and once she does, they immediately start calculating the months until it grows back. "I'll try some blush," the more daring ladies announce, but when she peers at them from the window of the shop after the appointment is over, most are sitting in their cars in the parking lot, rubbing at their cheeks with a Wet-Wipe from the glove box.
Carla closes the shop by flipping the sign, then lights a cigarette. She carefully counts the money in the cash register. Business is down; people just don't seem to want makeovers like they did in the '80s. Now, it's all about surgical enhancement. Only one fifty today; ten years ago, there would have been a dozen.
As she takes the last drag of her cigarette in her "smoke-free" shop, she thinks that it might be time to replace the wall paper. She wonders if she should go with stripes, and whether a Laura Ashley floral pattern would be too-old fashioned; maybe a solid color might make the shop look larger? She shrugs. What difference did it make? The clients would still be the same, the cash in the drawer at the end of the day would still be the same, and she would still be the same. The only thing different would be the view.
17 Comments:
That was fantastic, and I could smell the hairspray, and feel it, for I wore alot of it in the 80's.
It never dawned on me how strong a woman it takes to be a hairdresser. Not that I never thought otherwise, but when you think about the expectations we have of our hairdressers, they have alot on their shoulders.
And it is true, about only changing the view, sometimes, that is all we can do.
Love the notebook, and your the idea of 'writing prompts'....look forward to the next one.
This is SO REAL, and unbelievably bautifully told. To reveal that a beauty operator as the wisest of philosophers - brilliant!
What a yummy read!
I love the "more blush" and wetwipes in the car. We want change, but we don't.
"It's what Carla can't makeover, a dish-pan hand spirit, the "lay still till it's over" sexuality, the despair that accompanies impending unemployment"
hits the nail on the head. My clients want to change their life, or rather want their lives to be changed, like a lightbulb by a worker for them. But keep the old bulb too.
How does one rah-rah-rah someone into higher energy level? It's such a universal irony.
How much do I love that notebook with the paint chip tabs and the fuzzy orange yarn? Sooo much!
And the story is very evocative. Pearl already quoted my very favorite part: "It's what Carla can't makeover, a dish-pan hand spirit, the "lay still till it's over" sexuality, the despair that accompanies impending unemployment"...Wow. Lot of truth there, Cate.
Cate,
That may be my favorite thing you've written to date. I had nothing invested in it - like I would have if I were reading a novel.. and I was trying to get to the end, but I soaked in every word. And I loved it. I loved it all.
Well done.
hey girl. i had a minute to sneak away to check up on "Cate". Did you make that journal... I love it! the story AND the journal. it will live perfectly in there! Cheers!
Love the journal, love this post. Your eye for detail and illuminating moments in your stories is just beautiful Cate. I want to KNOW your characters.
Wow - what more can I say. You know I am a fan. This is so good! Great journal too. Can't wait to see what else you write in there.
"dish-pan hand spirit". That is so good!
Is this just a short, or are you going to keep going with it? It is good either way!
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I love your journal and I love this little tid-bit writing. I want to read more of the story though!!!
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Cate,
As usual your writing sings to the very core of me. I was there in that shop watching the whole scene.
Take your gift and SOAR!!!!!
You are such a TALENTED lady!
Lisa
Cate -
Loved the deep parts of this story about surfaces. Wow. How many of us hide behind cosmetic changes a soul that is entrenched and heels-dug-down deep in thoughts, attitudes and patterns that are so much less than we deserve. This would make a great novel if somehow Carla could find the magic ingredient to give "soul makeovers". Wonderful writing - please keep posting these! :)
I love the journal and I adore the story. I could picture all the ladies and know that 'lay still until its over' type of look that you see settling in on middle aged faces. Just wonderful!
Great journal...and excellent writing! Dang grrl!
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What a beautiful journal and I too remember the hairspray. Gosh do I ever. I just love your writing. It is so inspiring.
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Pear,
I'm already screwing up with the prompts. I wrote a lot last night, but didn't do any "assigments." Damn, damn, damn. Oh, and as one reformed hair spray girl to another, I hear ya, sister, loud and clear! Thanks.
Rebekah,
Thank you for your kind words. The people who work at the shop where I get my hair done always seem privy to the most intimate secrets--I love what you said: "the wisest of philosophers." Thank you!
Pearl,
Such a good commentary and question. Yes, how does one rah-rah another into higher energy? I'm such a pessimist (realist) that I don't think that lasting change is possible. I think that the tendency to return to the original lightbulb is too gripping. Thanks for the lovely comment and for making me think! xo
Deb,
Thanks for your comments. I was concerned about the notebook at first but then, felt sort of pleased with the end result (I'm in love with the yarn). Your words mean a lot to me! xo
Holli,
Alrighty, my toes are just curling here, basking in your generous praise! Thank you, thank you, thank you! THANK YOU! xo
Tara,
Thank you so much. Your words and encouragement mean a lot to me!
Jojo,
Thank you--I love the idea of stories living within the pages of the notebook! I hope you are doing well and having a good break. But don't stay away too long! I miss you!
Alexandra,
Oh, you are so kind! Thank you for your words! I really appreciate them!
Jennifer,
Thank you! That was such a nice comment!
Amber,
It's done. I have a hard time sustaining longer pieces! Thank you so much for your comment!
Andrea,
Thank you! "Tid-bit" writing! Love that!
Lisa,
Oh, that was so sweet! And get this: I was watching House Hunters on HGTV last night and they had a house with a porch that looks like yours is going to! I thought of you! I can't wait to see the pictures of it finished! You're gonna love that space!
Kim,
What a great way of looking at it--that magical makeover ingredient! You're good! I remember buying product after product years ago, looking for the correct "fix." Never happened. I needed someone to make me over inside! Your words are so true! Thank you.
Kiki,
Aw, thanks! You are so nice!
Jesse,
I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you!
Shannon,
Okay, you're now in the Reformed Hair Spray Club with me and Pear. See, I knew we would figure out a way to have our own clique (however uncool!). Thanks for the comment!
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