Sunday Scribblings: My Shoes
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When she was four, she discovered that if she clicked her tongue against the roof of her mouth, she could create a sound that resembled a footstep. Rapid, high pitched clicking, like water dripping, made her think of a lady in a gauzy dress and high heels, running through a parking garage. Less intense plopping created a clomping sound--heavy, rubber-soled shoes--the shadowed man who was chasing the delicate woman. There was no in-between click--no sturdy loafer or double-knotted sneaker.
Good shoes were a priority, but they never seemed to fit right. Shiney, patent-leather shoes, coveted because they looked like the ones that Dorothy poached in The Wizard of Oz, were a size too small. Suede pumps from her mother's younger days, made a pleasing snap against the marble hearth during dress-up, but were many sizes too big. Wader boots, ideal for stamping in ditches while scooping tadpoles, were a good size, yet tight in their damp, rubbery, rain forest humidity.
When she was grown, she relinquished shoes for handbags, though she still appreciated the protection of a good pair of flip flops, the vine-like beauty of a clingy espadrille, the heavenly lift of a wedge. And still, however, she appreciated the sound that her tongue made when she popped it the top of her mouth, and she daydreamed about the woman running in glassy stiletto shoes, who, this time, was no longer the one being chased.
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When she was four, she discovered that if she clicked her tongue against the roof of her mouth, she could create a sound that resembled a footstep. Rapid, high pitched clicking, like water dripping, made her think of a lady in a gauzy dress and high heels, running through a parking garage. Less intense plopping created a clomping sound--heavy, rubber-soled shoes--the shadowed man who was chasing the delicate woman. There was no in-between click--no sturdy loafer or double-knotted sneaker.
Good shoes were a priority, but they never seemed to fit right. Shiney, patent-leather shoes, coveted because they looked like the ones that Dorothy poached in The Wizard of Oz, were a size too small. Suede pumps from her mother's younger days, made a pleasing snap against the marble hearth during dress-up, but were many sizes too big. Wader boots, ideal for stamping in ditches while scooping tadpoles, were a good size, yet tight in their damp, rubbery, rain forest humidity.
When she was grown, she relinquished shoes for handbags, though she still appreciated the protection of a good pair of flip flops, the vine-like beauty of a clingy espadrille, the heavenly lift of a wedge. And still, however, she appreciated the sound that her tongue made when she popped it the top of her mouth, and she daydreamed about the woman running in glassy stiletto shoes, who, this time, was no longer the one being chased.
24 Comments:
Such fun, as always, Cate! I can't make that sound with my tongue. Picture me sitting here like a fool, imagining Cinderella fleeing down the long stairs, trying to make the sound effect. Ha! Love the turn-around at the end, too.
This is really a nice piece of writing. Great imagery. Thank you for sharing!
You got me tapping my tongue on the roof of my mouth. It sounds like the clicking of high heels on a hard surface. Fun to do, too. Thanks!
Makes me think of my daughter who loves shoes. Tap shoes, Grandma's high heels, rubber boots and more...
I needed inspiration, so I came to your page first. I like the clicking sound of the tongue. Nice.
I always look forward to your unique take on Sunday Scribblings and again you have wowed me. Love it!
I thoroughly enjoyed the 'easy' feel to this post. It's not the word I want but can't think of the right one at the moment. ....protection of a good pair of flip flops, the vine-like beauty of a clingy espadrille, the heavenly lift of a wedge.... I love these descriptions.
I loved the daydreaming quality to this post. And you had me clicking my tongue trying to get all the different sounds!! :):)
JTL
xxx
Oh I love this.
Beautiful Cate, loved how the story pulled you in and with the click of a tongue spit you out. Awesome!
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Cath,
I really enjoyed reading this. I know you already read it to me, but reading it myself gives it a new vibrancy that I don't get when it was read to me. (I still enjoy you reading them to me, though.) Anyway, I did the same thing except mine was for animal claws on concrete or wood floors, usually horses. And yes, you have certainly migrated from shoes to handbags. How many are you up to now?
I think this is wonderful. But then I bet you knew I would. :-)
This is so much fun! There's a sassy, worldliness to the tone that I really respond to.
I just love, love, love your writing. :)
Hey~
Your words can make boots and shoes seem to be intimate objects instead of inanimate objects...on that thought I want a new pair. Maybe ones with a heavenly lift of a wedge!!!
What an incredible transition you have described through delicious words. Your work is fabulous, and I love to read it every time!
Your writing always reminds me of either paintings or dreams....really good ones that you wish wouldn't end :-)
I love when a writer can make a story loop. Bringing it all back together in the end. Wrapping it up into a package.
What a fascinating take on this Sunday's Scribblings! I can always count on coming here for a direction and detail not to be found anywhere else!
This proves I am so not a shoe person. I can guess all the mind-blanks are shoe types. Can you do this for pants and shorts too. I draw a blank past calm diggers...
btw there's another bean-counter by name in my blogroll http://beancounters.blogs.com/daydreams/
Hi Cate! Great story, original and detailed as usual.... I wrote about patent-leather shoes and copycat friends... I am a handbag freak!
Take care....
greetings from England. I found your blog from somewhere or another and have on my feeds if that's OK.
I have a purple headgehog too.
Another piece of evocative writing! It's a wonderful skill to take a small, mundane moment and let it grow into a vibrant, thoughtful experience.
Excellent.. I love these sunday scribblings. And you're great at them.
I can actually do all the weird mouth noises - the water dropping sound, etc.. I guess I needed to keep myself amused as a child. :)
And I love a good shoe.
'rubbery rain forest humidity' - god, i love this description! another fantastic piece of writing, Cate, it's always such a treat to visit your blog
Sx
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