Thursday, March 23, 2006

Poetry Thursday

When 'Underneath It All' Isn't Good Enough

It was a friendship of overlays,
like the "frog" entry in an old World Book Encylopedia,
where the body is made up from layers:
organs
under bones
under muscles
under skin.
Just flip the page.

There was love, of course,
but it was obscured by other things:
judgement
under insecurity
under jealousy
under fear.

It was a worn encyclopedia of a friendship,
some pages ripped out,
some stuffed back in,
missing pages-
miscommunication-
misunderstanding-
and missed opportunity.

It was a history lesson buried
in the bog of a shelf
like a weathered, stale encyclopedia:
damaged,
useless,
eventually

forgotten.
____________

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16 Comments:

Blogger Deb R said...

I don't see an author listed, so can I assume you wrote this one?

I LOVE the imagery so much!

I can see it (loved those transparent layered pages in the encyclopedia when I was a kid!) and I can feel it. I've had exactly those friendships, just as you describe, that start out with so much promise and end up forgotten on the shelf.

3/23/2006 9:43 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I must know, did you write this?? Our amazing writer Cate is but a poet in disguise? Beautiful words, really really lovely.
a.

3/23/2006 10:22 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

JEEEEZZZZZZUUUUUUUUSSSSS!!!!

This is such an emotional poem! I feel so sad for this person. I am really moved by this. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

BTW, I am also assuming that you were the author of this.

3/23/2006 11:26 AM  
Blogger Jennifer S. said...

Very interesting...
And sad.

I'm impressed and moved.

3/23/2006 11:28 AM  
Blogger GreenishLady said...

I've wondered in the past about what if the things we rely on being there "underneath it all" aren't really there. You've so captured the desolation when you discover - the bog of a shelf. Wonderful piece.

3/23/2006 12:44 PM  
Blogger meghan said...

Ooh, I got goosebumps reading this - it was really evocative and honest. You are truly talented - WHAT a WRITER you ARE!! thank you for this!

3/23/2006 2:04 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is amazing. It describes a long-over friendship I had so perfectly. Thank you for giving words to that experience, and for sharing your writing.

3/23/2006 4:53 PM  
Blogger Shesawriter said...

This was very moving, Cate. You are SO talented.

Tanya

3/23/2006 7:25 PM  
Blogger Sarah said...

What an amazing piece of writing. Such wonderful imagery! Thank you for sharing this.

3/23/2006 8:34 PM  
Blogger Cate said...

Thank you, everyone, for your kind comments. I don't claim to be a poet, but it is nice having this blog to share ideas, creations, and writing, even when the result is far from perfect. I am grateful for your support as I work through the rough drafts and rough moments of my life!

3/23/2006 11:34 PM  
Blogger liz elayne lamoreux said...

the image of the love obscured by all the other things...this speaks to me deeply today.
so glad you have shared a piece of yourself here on Poetry Thursday. thank you.

3/23/2006 11:42 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Like the concept. Youch for the damaged relationship. POV could be fictionalized but sense of change is universal.

3/24/2006 2:13 AM  
Blogger daringtowrite said...

Oh Cate, I have yet to be disappointe with what I find when I arrive here. I love the way you think and write.

3/24/2006 3:01 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

That was awesome. It's funny though- I didn;t find it sad at all. After I read that coment I had to go back and read the poem again. I can see how it could be sad. I read it though, as a matter of fact kind of thing. Not sad, just explaining the way it was.

3/24/2006 10:01 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

That is really moving. Woman of many talents! The written word is your medium, however you chose to communicate them.

3/24/2006 10:44 AM  
Blogger hollibobolli said...

I really, really enjoyed this one. Of all the Thursday this-and-that's.. I love your Poetry Thursday entries.

3/26/2006 11:54 AM  

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